The Earth reminded us
of a Christmas tree ornament hanging in the blackness of space. As we got
farther and farther away, it diminished in size. Finally, it shrank to the size
of a marble, the most beautiful marble you can imagine. ~~ James Irwin, Astronaut (1930 - 1991)
Welcome to the first meeting in December blog entry.
Jan was our toastmaster of the day. She offered historical
information about lighted candles treated as Christmas tree ornaments and the relative
lack of (forest?) fires occurring.
The GAT(e) team comprised of: Grammarian – Warren [facilitate], Ah Counter – Lynne, and Timer – Devi.
There were three speakers and three corresponding evaluators.
The first speaker was Chizuko, who completed project #4 from the Competent Communicator
manual. She spoke within 7 minutes in a
speech entitled: "Accounting
Translation Taught Me A Lot Of Things!"
Chizuko emphasized at the onset that her job in Business translation differs
significantly from Literature translation. It concerns numbers, profits, costs,
revenues, material imports, and the current value of the Yen (Japanese
Currency) and in her view, is inherently boring. She offered her multilingual
skills in accounting and in her quest for flexibility, dealing with different
perspectives, she successively specialized in projects such as a Family
Restaurant, a heavy machinery firm, a Welfare organization for the elderly and
the Academic Society of Concrete.
She was evaluated by Jean. Jean thought she used
highly descriptive vocabulary about her job and offered a clear vision of Chizuko
at her desk learning about various business terms. Recommendations included
moving her body in a triangular set of positions to cover the entire audience
and creating a 4"x6" card in 3 colored sections to encapsulate her
speech: the first section Green with the speech start; the second Black with
the speech body; the third red with the summary. This card would be an
alternative to referring to the entire speech on paper from time to time. She
thought Chizuko showed humor, brilliance, poise and was well organized.
The second
speaker was Jim, who completed
project #2 from the Advanced Storytelling manual. He spoke within 8 minutes in a speech
entitled: "The Challenges Paul
Brought Me".
Jim
told of a time when he was a Psychology Intern and was assigned to Paul, a 14-year-old
(but looked like an 8-year-old) patient who was diagnosed with severe autism,
since he made sounds only. He didn't speak in words. Jim's had a 3-part plan to
improve the boy's quality of life.
First, to deal with (lack of) control issues,
he began to talk and hold hands and walk with Paul. He was successful with
this. Second, to teach him to talk. He rewarded Paul with an m&m candy whenever Paul mimicked the
word "mama" in any approximation. Eventually,
he was able to speak this word to his mother, who was beyond gratified. Third,
to protect Paul, he used a creative re-diagnosis to avoid a mandated transfer
to a hostile all male ward in favor of a more supportive child/adult center
across the campus. His speech was very moving.
Jim was voted the best speaker.
He
was evaluated by Barb. She wanted to
know more about Paul. Jim's speech was grounded, and focused us on the where,
when and relationship and goals. She liked the character description provided
to the climax and conclusion of the speech. She liked the objective oriented
structure of the speech with 3 goals and the summarization by grading himself
on how well he accomplished these goals. She suggested more description,
including about Jim himself during these interactions with Paul.
The third
speaker was Warren, who completed
project #2 from the Competent Communicator manual. He spoke within 7 minutes in a speech
entitled: "Force Field Analysis – A
Cool Tool".
He was evaluated by Julie. She was impressed with his gestures and the gradual unveiling of the process pictures to make the analysis clear. She wondered if this could also apply to any toastmaster club. She suggested that he could be a bit more dynamic and adjust his voice to emphasize certain points. In all, she was quite impressed with the concept he presented.
Dave was our humorist for today. He offered story about an elderly couple (Esther and Morris) who visited the state fair and went up on a helicopter ride on the condition that if they remained completely silent, the ride would be free, other wise they'd each have to pay $50. To influence them to yell or scream, the pilot did stunts and maneuvers designed to frighten them into yelling. When the helicopter landed, Morris and the pilot had decisively resolved the eternal tug of war between love and money.
1 Guest, Jing Z. and 12 Members attended
this meeting: Barb, Chizuko, Dave, Devi,
Jan, Jean, Jim, Julie, Kathy, Lynne, Robert and
Warren.
Respectfully
Submitted,
Robert
Katz for Amritha Imandi, Secretary
Public Speaking Northwest #9406
Thank you for writing this blog, Robert. You summarized each talk so clearly that I felt like I was experiencing this excellent meeting all over again.
ReplyDeleteRobert, I was at the meeting, but I learned a lot from the blog. Apparently I wasn't listening that well at the meeting, so I really appreciate your detailed summary. Thanks so much!
ReplyDeleteRobert, I was at the meeting, but I learned a lot from the blog. Apparently I wasn't listening that well at the meeting, so I really appreciate your detailed summary. Thanks so much!
ReplyDeleteRobert, after so many days i have gotten a chance to really relax and sit in front of the computer. Reading our blog was one of my to-do things of the day. You summarized every aspect of the meeting so well (as you always do :-)), i now have a desire to see and listen to the speeches myself. Special thanks for doing this in my absence. Amritha
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